吸煙有害健康的英語(yǔ)作文(吸煙有害健康的英語(yǔ)作文80字初二)

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老規矩，以下是正文目錄：

1，題目

2，高分范文

3，范文朗讀

4，范文解析

上題：

The charts show information about the percentage of teenagers who were cigarette smokers in a European country between 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗讀 -

▲范文音頻戳這里▲

The bar charts compare the proportion of smokers relative to gender and age for the years of 1995, 2000, and 2005, in a European country.

Overall, out of all three years, both genders in 1995 smoked less than the other age brackets in the other two years cited, with the 14-year-old group smoking the least.

There had been an increase in the number of 14-year-olds smoking in the year 2000 when compared to 1995 for both genders; however, in 2005, while the increasing trend continued for male 14-year-olds, slightly fewer female 14-year-olds were smoking, coming in at approximately 17.5%. Likewise, this pattern remained true for male 15 and 16-year-olds in 2005 when compared to the year 2000, with the proportion of 16-year-old boys falling to 35% and 15-year-olds to 28%; conversely, the percentage of 14-year-old boys smoking continued to increase to come in at 27% in 2005.

The pattern for the proportion of female smokers differed slightly, however, and was highest in 2005 for the 16-year-old category to stand at 28%, an increase of 3% from the year 2000, and similarly, the proportion of 15-year-old female smokers also increased, rising by 4% to reach 25% in 2005.

- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

Standard Task 1 Phrases: 小作文地道表達積累

• The bar charts compare
• the proportion of
• relative to
• for the years of
• Overall,
• out of all
• age brackets
• an increase in
• in the year
• when compared to (see notes)
• the increasing trend continued
• coming in at
• this pattern remained true for
• when compared to the year (see notes)
• fell to
• conversely,
• the percentage of
• continued to increase to come in at
• The pattern for the proportion of
• differed slightly
• category
• to stand at
• an increase of ___ from the (time—e.g. year)
• similarly
• rising by
• to reach

Vocabulary 高分詞匯

• relative to 與……相關(guān)
• gender 性別
• age brackets = age groups 年齡段
• cited 引用的
• approximately 大約
• conversely 相反
• category 類(lèi)別
• similarly 類(lèi)似

Cohesion (C&C words and phrases): 把這些簡(jiǎn)單的詞用好，能幫你在"連貫與銜接"方面輕松拿分

• relative to
• both
• less
• , with
• The least
• There… in the year
• for both
• ; however,
• , while
• , slightly fewer
• Likewise,
• this
• when compared to the year
• , with
• and
• ; conversely,
• differed slightly, however,
• highest
• , and similarly,
• also
• , rising by

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